Nov 27 2013

STEPPING STONES … By katie

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Unaware of what was lurking ahead, I took one step forward. My heart was pounding. Suddley, the water started to go out of hand and I started to run …I could not speak. I heard birds tweeting. I smelt rotting flesh and it smelt horrible. I saw dark green trees all around the woods it looked like it was waiting for someone or something to come- so it was ready to attack. Would I escape from this place?

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  1.   Jean Potteron 27 Nov 2013 at 5:39 pm

    I love the way you have introduced smell as part of the description of this scary place. Great stuff Katie!

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