Nov 27 2013

Stepping stones to… By Thomas

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Unaware of what was lurking, I took one step forward my heart was pounding quickly like a bouncy trampoline. Surprisingly,I heard a sound like a buzzing bee coming closer and closer…I took one small step and slowly walked over the dull, smooth rocks to the end of nowhere. Suddenly infront of me was a beautiful castle more beautiful then a flower. Did I have to walk in the mysterious castle?…shrieking it got darker and darker until it got pitch black my bouncy heart was racing..
“Who’s there?” I muttered.

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  1.   Jean Potteron 27 Nov 2013 at 5:37 pm

    Another scary opening from year 6 Thomas you have really captured the mood!


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