Mar 25 2014

100 WC Homework!

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Can you write a descriptive piece of writing, making sure you only use 100 words! Good Luck!
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  1.   Harveyon 25 Mar 2014 at 2:48 pm

    I could Feel the fresh air flowing through my hair, which is brown and spiked up. People shouted as I shuffled towards the trembling unique rock at the edge of the cliff hanging spike. The rock was an ice cube waiting to slip well I was looking over the dangerous edge. I could see a beach, which had tidal waves coming in, a forest which was as big as Mount Everest, and a layer of ice cold snow. I felt like a airplane sawing through the sky: which looked purple with ivory weight clouds. A helicopter swooped over me quickly.

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  2.   Kain 100 word challengeon 25 Mar 2014 at 2:50 pm

    Petrified, Jason hung over the edge of the ancient, crumbling Cliff looking down at the crystal clear water. Watching all the deadly waves crashing into the bottom of the cliff. He felt the shape numbing wind slapping across his face, sending a horrible chill through his body, thinking it was growing to sweep him off of the edge. Memory’s flashed in his brain of when his little brother had falling off of the cliff because of him. If he had listened to his mum and stayed at home if he wasn’t so argumentative if he didn’t take his little bro.

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  3.   Kyleon 25 Mar 2014 at 2:56 pm

    The man carefully stated down, thinking he was going to fall he moved back. He could smell the fresh air: and also the num hands as he felt as if they would drop and slide down the gigantic mountain. The sea rustled and the birds tweeted along with the strong wind. Suddenly he slipped off. If only he never sat there, if he had not took the dare, if he only had looked from the safe side, then he would not be in so much danger. Quickly, rapid, dangerous,- he dropped more and he slipped off faster and even faster.

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  4.   Jamieon 25 Mar 2014 at 2:56 pm

    It looks fantastic because it is ginormous there is lots of mountains and there is a man with a red coat on him it looks amazing it looks like the man is going to fall of the massive brown mountain and the man is putting is little legs down the ginormous mountain

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  5.   Almaon 25 Mar 2014 at 2:59 pm

    As I carefully sat down on the cold damp ground I felt a shiver running down my back. The icy cold breeze danced around me and the mountains. What was I doing? Sitting down on the edge of a mammoth cliff. If only I didn’t let her down, if only I knew what I was doing, if only listened then I wouldn’t be here. My warm gloves felt like an hot oven melting my fingers. As my fingers reached out for the breeze it began to be num making me move them. The waves crashed like smashing rocks on ground.

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  6.   Bradley Hodsonon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:00 pm

    What a dare devil

    This, devalish man, is about to jump off one of the highest cliffs in the world. The cliff is really steep and rocky it has spiky edges and crumbly rocks, which always fall off into the water every now again. Down below the water is smashing against the cliff, which is ginormous and bumpy like a mountain. The man is going to jump he gets ready but he can’t do it he’s too scared because he doesn’t have the guts to do it he be leaves in himself but he also doesn’t. Will he do it? What’s going to happen?

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  7.   Brendanon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:02 pm

    Carefully as the man slowly sat on the edge of the jagged,crumbled mountain he began to reflect back in his life. Tempting,puzzled,confused- what would he do to save himself, if only he had listened, if only he could save himself,if only he had stayed at home, then he wouldn’t be in this situation : as the crashing waves bellowed go away he thought to himself what would he do next?the boy ,who only thirteen, looked down at the rocky cliff on the outside he felt strong but (on the inside he felt sad,lonely and terrified.

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  8.   Katieon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:04 pm

    100 word challenge

    Zain,a young dare devil,were going to jump off the biggest rock ever.Would Zain make it alive or was he going to die?
    Zains heart was beating like a drum.
    Waves crashing,rocks breaking:would Zain die young?
    Could Zain change his mind,why did he go there in the first place.
    Did his friend make him do it? Was he mad at someone? Did he get in trouble? Was he really going to jump…
    Would someone save him.
    Could zain stop and move away.
    Would he fall? Would he die? Could he be saved?

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  9.   Elizahon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:05 pm

    SILLY GIRL

    The girl could feel the fresh cold air bashing against her soft silky face she felt like jumping off the hard high rock she didn’t want to jump but ( inside she felt like jumping) she could hear the waves crashing under her shaking knees she tried not to look down but she just couldn’t help it, she sat down on the edge of the shaky sharp rock was it going to fall? Carefully she started bringing her head up, wondering what she had done wrong. Should she have ran away? Should she have listened to her parents? Mum help please!!

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  10.   Harryon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:06 pm

    All of a sudden a ancient old man a peered on the top of a mighty mountain he slowly got up on to a rock and started to turn his head around while looking a the view. So he got to the edge of the rock and sat down peacefully staring at the bottom of the big cliff as he got his precious head up he gripped on to the bumpy rock what was about to snap…. So the small man walled across the scary cliff what was he going to do now? So he opened his eyes and walked….

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  11.   Joeon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:07 pm

    Frantic, Qwild, fearless the experienced climber, who was called Jack and he was 18 years old.
    He thought that he was mighty enough to climb to the top of the monsterous mountain that toured over his city. At he edge of the all mighty cliff face was as stern as an old fossil. Crash bash whoosh the gentle elegant snow came tumbling down from the razor sharp top of the cliff as if the was some mystical force stopping him from reaching the top… But even though he was only 15 foot away from reaching his goal spotted an edge and scrambled to the edge.
    On the edge!

    By Joe

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  12.   year6on 25 Mar 2014 at 3:08 pm

    100 word challenge by Brandon

    Matt sat on the manky green moss that laid on the Rocky Mountain. He was scared, because he thought that he was going to fall of, eventhough He was one of the best mountain climbers in the world. Matt was not happy his friends were too scared to come along with him. His hands were like rubber in the cold,freezing breeze the wind blew in Matts red face.
    He took one big deep breath only if his friends would have come with him he would have a brilliant time with them all. Matt was ready for his warm bed.

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  13.   Joshuaon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:08 pm

    Jerry, a mountain of a man, shuffled towards the edge. He kneeled down on the solid rock and stared out into the endless mist, he could see the spectacular ocean view and the breath taking mountains. Was it a dream? He sat on the edge of the humungous cliff, his feet dangling 10,000 meters above the razor sharp rocks. He looked down at the tiny people walking along the marble pathways, they were looked like ants! All of a sudden his head started to spin it felt like he was falling and falling. Slowly, he opened his eyes and saw…

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    •   Mrs Harrison 25 Mar 2014 at 8:43 pm

      Oh Josh! I want to know what happened to Jerry!

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  14.   Harrison 100 world challengeon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:09 pm

    Bob sat on the massive, dangerous cliff thinking of his nasty mistakes. While wishing his family was still alive, Because his family died in a house fire. Consequently he knew his family couldn’t come back. Rain drops fell down from his eyes. He had nobody, he had been living on the chilly streets eating peoples rubbish, and drinking Water from the rain. The wind made a chill down his spine. The wind said it will be ok it sounded like his wide. Will he ever be happy? Will he have another family? Will bob have any more amazing smart children?

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  15.   Finleyon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:14 pm

    Suddenly and daringly , Mick slowly strolled down the rock. If  he fell, if he jumped,if the rock snapped, then all of a sudden he misteriosly sat down on the sharpe edged rock he was so cold it was like a million ice cubes were all over his body. The water about one hundred feet down we’re clashing against the wall his heart was beating like a drum he could see eagles fighting over some food. He knew he could do this climb and break the world record. He wanted to do it but on the inside he was scared.

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    •   Mrs Harrison 25 Mar 2014 at 8:42 pm

      This is FAB Finley, love the if only …

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  16.   Elizabethon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:17 pm

    The Lonely Boy.
    Carefully, silently, heartbroken – the red hearted boy fought to calm himself down.He was the edge, of a big grey mountain(hoping to esteem).At the top of the mountain he seems to be engulfing the word, he can see the word, his like a master. Suddenly, the wind started blow ponderously: his about to fell.What would happen to him?

    The boy stood up to the wind, daring to move forward, he look down,the wind blew heavily untilll ” No,no,nooooooooo!”. He’s gone, he’s gone. Will he survive or die?

    The boy sat on a mountain looking down, he’s gone his family were cheerless for him. Bye bye his lost.

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  17.   Courtneyon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:20 pm

    Edge of a cliff!!!!!!!!

    Dean, who was 31, felt like he was flying, in the pearlescent, blue sky. Was it going to take his life? Crash, bang, whoosh- as the waves forcefully crushed the selfless rocks. Running away the birds flew beside him. All of a sudden, a gust of wind ran down his whole body. Perspiration droplets ran down his brow. Falling down the rocks were coming up…
    Pulling the the rope for the parachute it wasn’t coming out! Stuck! Frustrated! Lonely! Miserable? Was he going to die? Was he going to land safe? Will he survive? If only…

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  18.   Pollyon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:21 pm

    He looked down and saw him there…
    Bored,Steve went for a long,relaxing walk next to the crumbling cliff in hope that he would his dog (Bob) who ran off while they were walking up hear,”BOB!!” He shouted “where are you!” He once again screamed,it was no use he’s probebly already somewhere far away from hear all on his own. He went and sat down on the edge of the colossal cliff,he got the nerves to finally look down and what he saw was everyone’s nightmare,Bob lying squashed on the cold,hard floor “ahhhh,ahhhh,ahhhhh” he is deffently in trouble now

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  19.   Yasminon 25 Mar 2014 at 3:34 pm

    I looked down and I saw a breath taking view at the end of my finger tips. Fresh, cold, new the breeze engulfed the mountain top as I sat down. Scared ,shocked, astonished, the edge of the cliff seemed that it was moving, trying to get me. What was it?why was it doing that?why did it want me… The Crystal ocean glistened in the sun like a diamond in the sky. The sun glisend in shimmery shiny glorious sky. I jumped would would I make it? Would I make it to the end.

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  20.   Mrs Harrison 25 Mar 2014 at 8:41 pm

    Looking down into the endless abyss, the man who was so lonely, felt as though nobody cared. With eyes that felt as heavy as the strongest steel, he gazed towards the bottom, an enormous hole carved from the mountains. Pitiful, proud, perplexed – he thought of days long ago, days when he had been so happy…
    Longing for those halcyon times, he choked back a sob as he gritted his teeth and made a decision. If only she had stayed, if only he hadn’t hurt her, if only she was here…
    He stood, he turned, he really had to find her!

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